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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ December 23rd, 2010, 5:53 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Marian Fitzooth | 
| This one was a little harder. I felt like I was grasping at straws, and I had to resort to some flower symbolism. I don't know if that makes it deeper or weaker.  Marian Fitzooth …Body {Eyes…… [Color (Melted milk chocolate) …………………………………… (Dark bay horse)] …………………….... [Depth (A doe's eyes)] ……………………… [Sparkle (A mirror)]} ……… {Smile………………… (A summer day)]} ...... {Hair...... [Color (Chestnuts) ............................... (Dark maple syrup)] .................... [Texture (Ocean waves) ................................ (Brocade)] .......{Face......[Colour (Partridge eggs)] .....................[Shape (Well-polished marble statue)] ……… {Motion... [Grace (Hummingbirds) …………………………………… (Grass swaying in the wind) .................... [Strength (Spun glass)] ……………………….[Agility (A gymnast) ...............................(A young child)]} …….. {Beauty……………... (A willow tree) ……………………………………. (Lake Moraine) …………………………………... (Starry sky)]} …Spirit {…………[Quality (New snow)] ……………………… [Gentleness (A mother with her child) ......................................(Velvet) ......................................(A lullaby)] ……………………… [Loyalty (Dolphins) .................................(Daisies)]} …Mind {………………… [Clarity (Sheltered spring) ……………………………………….....(Diamonds)] …………………………….. [Depth (A pool below a waterfall)] …………………………….. [Knowledge (A mother explaining the world to her child) ………………………………….............. (A young scholar)] ...........................[Logic (A blunt comment) ………………………………….......(Prairies)]} …Soul {………………… [Depth (A crater on the moon) ………………………………………… (A forest)] ……………………………. [Purity (A quiet night ………………………………………… (Lilies)] …………………………… [Love (A new mother) ..................................(A newlywed)]} | |
| Author: | Seer of Endor [ December 23rd, 2010, 11:05 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Marian Fitzooth | 
| I see what you mean. Not your strongest work, but it's still a well-crafted essence map. If you really have issues with it, I'd say sleep on it a night or two and then come back to it if you like. But I really think that this one works very well. Keep up the good work. | |
| Author: | Lady Shanai-Irisis [ February 16th, 2011, 10:45 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Marian Fitzooth | 
| Oooh, I like how you likened her hair to ocean waves. Such a beautiful metaphor! | |
| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ February 18th, 2011, 1:30 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: Marian Fitzooth | 
| Thanks.   | |
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