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Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ December 17th, 2010, 6:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth's essence

Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth
…Body {Eyes…… [Color (Alberta sky)
…………………………………… (Cornflowers)]
…………………….... [Depth (Shallow puddle)
……………………………………. (An almost dry river)]
………………………. [Sparkle (Opaque turquoise)]
......................[Twinkle (Mischief)
..................................(A jewel poking out of the dirt)]}
……… {Smile………………… (A sunny day)]}
...... {Hair...... [Color (Corn silk)
............................... (A field of wheat)]
.................... [Texture (Homespun thread)]
.......{Face.................(Stubble left on a field after harvest)}
……… {Motion... [Grace (A newborn horse)
…………………………………… (A fish out of water)
.................... [Strength (An ox)
……………………………………… (An old oak)]
………………………. [Speed (Antelope)]}

…Spirit {………….[Quality (White fabric with a splotch of blood)]
……………………… [Leadership (A wild stallion)
.....................................(A warrior chief)]
……………………… [Loyalty (A burr stuck on clothing)]
……………………… [Kindness (A new father)]}

…Mind {………………… [Clarity (A winter night)]
…………………………….. [Depth (A summer lake)]
…………………………….. [Knowledge (A large book)
………………………………….............. (An older man)]
...........................[Logic (A winding path)
....................................(A solid rock)]}

…Soul {………………… [Depth (Night sky)
………………………………………… (The ocean)]
……………………………. [Hidden pain (A persisting headache)
………………………………………… (A throbbing finger)]}

Author:  Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ December 17th, 2010, 6:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth's essence

I am torn... the purist in me wants to say "how dare you attempt to make an essence of Robin Hood!!! :evil: " the logic in me says, "So? That's cool! :cool:"

Make of that what you will... :roll:

*stares askance at the essence map once more...*

The loyalty part is funny. :D

Author:  Seer of Endor [ December 20th, 2010, 6:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth's essence

Well done.
I find your description of his lack of gracefulness intriguing since most interpretations have graceful motion as one of his key qualities (I think it has something to due with the subconscious association of skill at archery with graceful motion). It certainly makes him your own character, unique from traditional Robin Hoods. You also used excellent metaphors. The use of rustic images gives him an almost farm-boy feel that most Robin Hoods don't possess. Well done!

Author:  PrincessoftheKing [ December 20th, 2010, 8:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth's essence

Great job, Raven!

I get a very different impression than your normal, run-of-the-mill Robin Hood! I was also very intrigued by Robin's lack of grace. :)

Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ December 21st, 2010, 6:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth's essence

Jaynin wrote:
I am torn... the purist in me wants to say "how dare you attempt to make an essence of Robin Hood!!! :evil: " the logic in me says, "So? That's cool! :cool:"


That's funny, Jaynin!

Seer wrote:
I find your description of his lack of gracefulness intriguing since most interpretations have graceful motion as one of his key qualities. It certainly makes him your own character, unique from traditional Robin Hoods. You also used excellent metaphors. The use of rustic images gives him an almost farm-boy feel that most Robin Hoods don't possess. Well done!


Thanks! I'm glad that his unusualness shone through. Even though I'm using some of the same characters as other Robin Hood stories, I try to make them as much my own as possible.

PrincessoftheKing wrote:
Great job, Raven!

I get a very different impression than your normal, run-of-the-mill Robin Hood! I was also very intrigued by Robin's lack of grace. :)


Thanks!

Author:  Seer of Endor [ December 31st, 2010, 12:04 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth's essence

Here's a graphic inspired by this map. It was a bit trickier to fit the whole impression in one pic than it was for Gisborne.

Author:  Zoe M. Scrivener [ January 7th, 2011, 12:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth's essence

Wow! I like it. :) Thanks!

Author:  Lady Shanai-Irisis [ February 17th, 2011, 12:07 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Robin Hood/Robert Fitzooth's essence

The way you word the descriptions and all makes me think of a country style Robin Hood, haha. Which, now that I think of it, is a very intriguing idea.

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