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 Post subject: Unfinished and Untitled (semap)
PostPosted: September 7th, 2011, 9:00 pm 
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I really cannot explain this map. :P I met...a perfect stranger, or saw, rather, and was just really struck by the potential story lurking behind her face. She may wind up an MC in my historical-fiction novel, but who knows. Anyways, this is a partially-finished, untitled semap that I never plan on finishing. I don't know why :P

Body
 Hair
  Length
   - rolling wave breaking on the sand
   -
  Fine
   - the silky touch of a well-worn blanket
   - glossy sheen of an apple’s skin
   - careful stroking of a kitten’s fur
 Eyes
  Deep
   - the chocolate lake in Charlie & Chocolate Factory
   - a thrashing waterfall crashing down on the rocks
   - soft twinkle of a beautiful flower
  Free
   - a herd of gazelle on an open plain
 Face
  Soft
   - melting in a sea of goose down
   -
 Build
 Slender
   - a willow tree blowing in the wind
   - cattails bobbing in the breeze
   -
  Fit
   - The powerful muscles of a stallion
Mind
 Belonging
  Longing
   - A valuable diamond locked up in a safe
   - A child hoping to own a horse
   - powerful, shaking thunder of horse’s hooves
  - a family gathered around a Christmas tree
 Love
  - a valuable diamond ring, given as a present
Soul
 Trust
  - a glass elevator
  - strong arms of a father
  - solid trunk of an oak tree
  Dependable
   - An intricate machine, running without error
 Ambition
Spirit
 Life
  - A bubbling spring, overflowing
  -

Anyways, I promised myself I'd never use the word 'random' again, but that's basically what this map is: random :P

eru

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 Post subject: Re: Unfinished and Untitled (semap)
PostPosted: September 7th, 2011, 11:57 pm 
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Anyways, I promised myself I'd never use the word 'random' again, but that's basically what this map is: random :P
You're cured! :rofl:

I look forward to seeing what happens with this. :D

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PostPosted: September 8th, 2011, 6:00 am 
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Yeah, as do I, Sui. At best I think an addition to my Hi-Fi novel is in order :P

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PostPosted: September 8th, 2011, 10:03 pm 
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PostPosted: September 15th, 2011, 2:35 pm 
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Ooh, it's pretty. :D I especially like the diamond ring one for love and a bubbling spring for life.

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PostPosted: September 19th, 2011, 11:32 am 
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I like it, Eru! :D It gives a very compelling picture, even unfinished!

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PostPosted: September 20th, 2011, 6:01 am 
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@Elly/Milly: Thanks, y'all :D

Sui suggested that I incorporate this character into another novel of mine, so maybe I will finish it someday *shrugs*

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