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Author:  Calenmiriel [ November 23rd, 2010, 2:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Charlotte's Essence >_<

I don't know what happened, but last night it was like something clicked in my brain when I was reading Amanda's essence map for Aaron. I was profiling Charlotte in my "Random Book Characters" notebook and thought I'd try an essence map or make one up. After reading Aaron's I found it pretty straightforward and figured out (to a point) how to set up the syntax.

Here is my very first ever essence map!!! I hope it makes sense. ><;; (Feel free to lend any tips.) ;)

Charlotte Ann Wilkons

Personality{
..................Outward[
................................Vibrant(
............................................< Fourth of July sparklers >
............................................< noontime sun >
............................................< spectrum of color >)

..............................Dramatic(
............................................< light and darkness >
............................................< climax of a story >
............................................< the unveiling of something new >)

................................Joyous(
............................................< signs of spring >
............................................< a break in the clouds >
............................................< new life >)]

..................Inward[
..........................Thoughtful(
............................................< caressing wind >
............................................< water lapping the shore >
............................................< a bird in the sky >)

............................Stubborn(
............................................< an unbroken horse >
............................................< hair on a humid day >
............................................< a child who won't eat their vegetables >)

..............................Loyalty(
............................................< Canadian goose to its mate >
............................................< solider to their country >
............................................< sunrise to sunset >)]

Body{
..................Head[
.................................Hair(
............................................< sunlight on honey >
............................................< lightly stained maple wood >
............................................< curls like wood shavings >)

................................Eyes(
............................................< dappled sunlight through tree leaves >
............................................< color of Spanish olives >
............................................< window to the soul >
............................................< a sudden storm >)

................................Arms(
............................................< sturdy limbs of a young oak >
............................................< graceful as willow boughs >)

...............................Hands(
............................................< fluttering butterflies >)]

Author:  Kiev Shawn [ November 23rd, 2010, 2:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

*dances around* Nice job! I think at the end of the map you do the parallel brackets, but that was all I could think of. :D

Calenmiriel wrote:

Hands(
< fluttering butterflies >)


Something like that, but you would do it for the other brackets too. Let me know if I just confused you... :D

Author:  Calenmiriel [ November 23rd, 2010, 2:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Ummm, you mean putting the analogy in parentheses?

Example: Hands(
.......................(fluttering butterflies)?

Author:  Calenmiriel [ November 23rd, 2010, 2:42 pm ]
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Did I fix it right? :)

Author:  Kiev Shawn [ November 23rd, 2010, 2:48 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Calenmiriel wrote:
Personality{
..................Outward[
................................Vibrant(
............................................< Fourth of July sparklers >
............................................< noontime sun >
............................................< spectrum of color >)

..............................Dramatic(
............................................< light and darkness >
............................................< climax of a story >
............................................< the unveiling of something new >)

................................Joyous(
............................................< signs of spring >
............................................< a break in the clouds >
............................................< new life >)]


Essentially, when you did "Outward," you used this bracket: [. When you finish doing "Outward," you use ] at the end of that section to show you are doing something else (aka "Inward")

Author:  Kiev Shawn [ November 23rd, 2010, 2:48 pm ]
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Yeah, except you apply it to the other brackets too. :D

Author:  Elanhil [ November 23rd, 2010, 8:44 pm ]
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And that happens also when you finish an aspect.

Personality{
..................Outward[
................................Vibrant(
............................................< Fourth of July sparklers >
............................................< noontime sun >
............................................< spectrum of color >)

..............................Dramatic(
............................................< light and darkness >
............................................< climax of a story >
............................................< the unveiling of something new >)
. . .
............................................< hair on a humid day >
............................................< a child who won't eat their vegetables >)

..............................Loyalty(
............................................< Canadian goose to its mate >
............................................< solider to their country >
............................................< sunrise to sunset >)]}

Nice map, by the way. I really like the sunrise to sunset metaphor.

Author:  Calenmiriel [ November 23rd, 2010, 8:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Thank you kindly, Shawn! Thanks, Elanhil, for the help and compliment! I actually found the challenge of doing this fun. :D

Author:  Elanhil [ November 23rd, 2010, 9:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Of course you did! Essence is great! *coughjaynincough* Oh wait, I posted in that thread as well... :blush:

Author:  Kiev Shawn [ November 23rd, 2010, 9:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

It is fun, especially when you "get in the mood." You're welcome; call it thanks for helping me with naming. :D

Author:  Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ November 23rd, 2010, 10:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Elanhil wrote:
Of course you did! Essence is great! *coughjaynincough* Oh wait, I posted in that thread as well... :blush:


Essence is great! I never said it wasn't! :rofl:

Author:  Elanhil [ November 24th, 2010, 6:57 am ]
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I guess you're right. :D

Author:  Calenmiriel [ November 24th, 2010, 11:37 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Elanhil wrote:
Of course you did! Essence is great! *coughjaynincough* Oh wait, I posted in that thread as well... :blush:

Nice, Elanhil, nice. :rofl:

Shawn Henderson wrote:
It is fun, especially when you "get in the mood." You're welcome; call it thanks for helping me with naming. :D


Hahaha! Well then! I'd say we're even! XD

Author:  Rachel Newhouse [ November 24th, 2010, 11:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

This is amazing! I am in awe of it. The wood shavings metaphor is my favorite.

Author:  Calenmiriel [ November 25th, 2010, 11:12 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Thanks, Philli! Believe it or not, I had to think really hard of a good example for curly hair...it's not wavy nor is it ringlets. Since my dad demonstrates time period coopering I get to see all the wood chips he makes. They make great temporary bracelets too. ;)

Note: For those who don't understand what I'm talking about:

Coopering: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cooper_%28profession%29

1800's-1840's is the time period my family portrays in rendezvous when we re-enact.

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ November 28th, 2010, 1:05 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

You do reenactments? Awesome!

I really like the essence map--for a first one it looks great. But I didn't see anything wrong with the syntax...did you edit it since Shawn and Elanhil showed you what's what? :?

eruheran

Author:  Kiev Shawn [ November 28th, 2010, 1:40 pm ]
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She did, Eruheran. ;)

Author:  Calenmiriel [ November 28th, 2010, 10:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

eruheran wrote:
You do reenactments? Awesome!

I really like the essence map--for a first one it looks great. But I didn't see anything wrong with the syntax...did you edit it since Shawn and Elanhil showed you what's what? :?

eruheran


It is indeedy very awesome! There are so many interesting people! It's like coming to a family reunion! We do about 3 rendezvous from September-October. We also host one at our place in April, but it's going to be in June this year due to the poor weather we've had for the past 3 years.

Why thank you, eruheran! I was excited, yet tentative about it since it was my first one. :3 Ahahaha! Yes, like Shawn said, I edited it after receiving help from Elanhil and Shawn herself. :D

Author:  Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ November 29th, 2010, 4:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

That's pretty cool!

eruheran

Author:  Calenmiriel [ November 29th, 2010, 8:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Hee hee, thaaaanks. :D

Author:  Lady Shanai-Irisis [ January 19th, 2011, 9:33 pm ]
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Calenmiriel, this was extremely beautiful! I love the picture painted here, and I love the syntax. So clean and easy to read.

Author:  Calenmiriel [ February 1st, 2011, 1:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Charlotte's Essence >_<

Oh! Why thank you, Lady Shanai! ^^ I really enjoyed working on hers. I finished the other main character of that story as well, I I haven't posted it yet. :)

~Calen

Author:  Lady Shanai-Irisis [ February 16th, 2011, 11:59 pm ]
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You are most welcome! I can't wait to see what you post next! :)

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