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 Post subject: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 8:12 am 
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In my book there are a race of people that exceeds all other races. This race is the Gronglins. They are super fast, strong, and can turn invisible for a period of time.

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 9:34 am 
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They sound really cool!

Are they humans or another race entirely?

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 1:50 pm 
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They are similar to humans. They are supposed to represent angels. They are not humans though ;) Also there is a race that came from the gronglins (they represent demons)

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 1:59 pm 
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That's really neat!

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 2:01 pm 
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Cool Ummm any thing else? Any suggestions?

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 2:10 pm 
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What part do they play in your story?

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 2:13 pm 
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Well my main character( Malchus) is a gronglin but doesn't know it. He journeys to the capitol of the world and seeks the King. Little does he know that the King wants Malchus to be the next great warrior.

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 2:30 pm 
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I have a few questions. Are they capable of wrong? If not, why? If so, what are their weaknesses? Where is their final destination?

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 4:17 pm 
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They are not capable of wrong. But once upon a time(in the beginning)( I will write about this in another thread), they had the choice to follow a rebellious Gronglin named Arenki(like Satan)

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 5:26 pm 
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What is their destiny?

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I feel the rain roll down my face.
I feel the pain. I feel the sorrow.
I feel the love. I feel the joy.
I feel the darkness. I feel the night.
I feel cold. I feel warm.
I feel hunger. I feel thirst.
I feel the dawn. I feel the dusk.
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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 5:29 pm 
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Oh there destiny is serving the King and training people that the King has chosen to serve him to fight and defend themselves

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
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Okay. Who are the "people"?

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I feel the pain. I feel the sorrow.
I feel the love. I feel the joy.
I feel the darkness. I feel the night.
I feel cold. I feel warm.
I feel hunger. I feel thirst.
I feel the dawn. I feel the dusk.
I feel blood. I feel death. I feel life.


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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
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ohh the races. Elves, Dwarves and others

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 5:34 pm 
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Post about them! That's an order! Just kidding. But seriously, we'd all love to hear about them. Also, go introuce yourself. :evil: I'm ornery if I don't know who people are.

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I feel the pain. I feel the sorrow.
I feel the love. I feel the joy.
I feel the darkness. I feel the night.
I feel cold. I feel warm.
I feel hunger. I feel thirst.
I feel the dawn. I feel the dusk.
I feel blood. I feel death. I feel life.


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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: November 11th, 2009, 5:38 pm 
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ok will do. Um any other Q's I am still inventing them and the others(LOL)

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: February 15th, 2010, 10:27 am 
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Make a topic about the dark gronglins! :)

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
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Location: Riding (or writing) against the foes of the free peoples of Middle Earth!
If they aren't capable of wrong, then how did Arenki rebel?

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: February 16th, 2010, 12:17 pm 
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They had the choice at one time to rebel, but before and after that they were not able to do any wrong (well at least the good ones).

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Location: Riding (or writing) against the foes of the free peoples of Middle Earth!
So none of them can fall now and become evil.

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Griffin
"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
-Gandalf

"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Current projects:
Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: February 18th, 2010, 10:28 pm 
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I'm not sure, but I guess not.

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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: February 19th, 2010, 9:10 am 
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So if Malchus is really a Gronglin, then he can't do anything wrong? That seems like it would be rather difficult to write about.

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Note:
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I stand in support of Jay, for he is my brother in Christ.


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 Post subject: Re: Gronglins
PostPosted: February 19th, 2010, 10:34 pm 
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As fallen humans it is really hard to write perfect characters, most need a flaw for them to be in a story.

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