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 Post subject: The Equizack
PostPosted: November 6th, 2010, 3:58 pm 
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Here you go eruheran ;)


If you haven't read my posts on the Equihu and the Zarack, please do so before reading this. It'll making things clearer ;)



Equizack
A cross between an Equihu and a Jakunter (one of the Zarack). There was only one ever born. His name was Vashack. He was the son of Kamina (Equihu) and Drakon (Jakunter). Vashack was conceived when Kamina, in human form, was raped by Drakon. Hoping the child would not survive, Kamina changed to horse form when the child was soon to be born. But the child survived and was born in horse form, unable to change to human like his mother.
He took everything but his form from his father. His personality, feelings, looks, and behavior all mirror his Jakunter father.
Vashack is Friesian in build with white mane and tail, white feathers, and an extension of his white mane that goes down his back to his tail. His eyes are red as are his hooves.
If you care to look, BONUS pictures! :D
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My first attempt at making a character sheet for him.
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My second attempt at making his character sheet. I like this one better.
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I picture of him that someone online made for me :D

The character description I sent to the person who made the last picture:
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Details: he is very muscular and has almost no visible bone structure except for his head (In reality, the only bones he has are his skull, back bones and hooves - the rest is held together with muscle - I've described him as being almost snake-like) His body color is pure black, with only a slight shine to it. (small scales if you really want to add them) His mane goes along the back of his neck and down his back till it joins his tail. The section along his neck is long (to about the bottom of his shoulder) and thick. The section along his back is shorter (but not sticking up - probably around half a foot) and gets thinner/shorter as it goes towards the tail. The tail is think and short. (about the same length as the mane) The end of his mane and tail look like they've been dipped in blood. (about three inches of blood) His eyes are blood red and there is a 6 inch long (white) scar on his face (vertical) His hooves are a deep red (like he walked in blood) and above each hoof there is a small coronet band of blood red. From his knees and hocks down he has trailing hair (white with blood colored ends, like the mane and tail) this hair goes down the back of his legs.

Character: he's a cross breed of one of the most heartless creatures that was created and one of the most beautiful. So he should have an evil charm to his look, but more evil since he takes after his father - the heartless creature. He doesn't try to look "nice" but his mother's looks make him irresistible. He attacks/kills any living thing (another characteristic from his father and thus the blood stains)

Other random info: the scar was "given" to him by his mother when he attacked her. Unlike his mother, he does not have the ability to shape-shift into a human. He lives alone in an overgrown forest with almost no other animals (he most likely killed them...)



all-in-all: a very evil creature :evil: I'll have to introduce one of my "good" beasties soon to counteract all the evil ones :shock: Questions and comments? They extremely welcome ;)

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 Post subject: Re: The Equizack
PostPosted: November 6th, 2010, 5:38 pm 
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Ugh, that guy is creepy. *shiver* I like the third picture myself. So, how exactly do his muscles hold him up? Octopi have muscles, and they are pretty floppy. How could he walk?

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 Post subject: Re: The Equizack
PostPosted: November 6th, 2010, 6:11 pm 
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I'd compare his limbs more to a snake. I know even in that sense it wouldn't really work, and he probably still has most of the skeletal bones. I haven't looked up which ones would need to be "missing" for him to move the way I imagine. (I should go do that)
I might change a few things about his actual makeup, but he'll still have th same movement. (i.e. snake-like)

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My name is outward proof of my promise to follow, closer and closer, the words and will of my Lord and Father.


note:
Vilisse is Quenya for a person's spirit or general personality.
Mimetes is Greek for an imitator or follower.

and so my spirit is one of a follower



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 Post subject: Re: The Equizack
PostPosted: November 6th, 2010, 6:40 pm 
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Ah, I see. So, his slippery and slithy personality/attitude will be reflected in his slippery and slithy build? :D

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 Post subject: Re: The Equizack
PostPosted: November 6th, 2010, 6:43 pm 
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yup, I'll have to go research a bit to finalize his actual makeup :P

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I am Lady Vilisse Mimetes. Humble servant of the Lord our God and warrior in His name. Though my actions are feeble and prone to failure, I shall never falter in my call. I am pledged to combat those ideas that are rooted in mindsets that are contrary to my Master.
My name is outward proof of my promise to follow, closer and closer, the words and will of my Lord and Father.


note:
Vilisse is Quenya for a person's spirit or general personality.
Mimetes is Greek for an imitator or follower.

and so my spirit is one of a follower



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 Post subject: Re: The Equizack
PostPosted: November 6th, 2010, 10:46 pm 
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Yay! Thanks. =)

This is a really evil sounding guy. If I saw him running towards me in a dark ally, I'd run! Has he tried in the past to get out of his horse form?

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 Post subject: Re: The Equizack
PostPosted: November 6th, 2010, 10:55 pm 
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He's more beast than "human" (I think I forgot to mention Equihu -and thus Equizack- cannot speak when a horse) When he was young he attacked his mother and so never learned who he is (because his mother left him).
Because he's not entirely Equihu, he's stuck in the form he was born in. But the Equihu part of him helped him "survive" when ever Kamina changed before he was born.
So, he actually doesn't know he's part Equihu and hasn't tried to change. (even though he can't anyway)

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I am Lady Vilisse Mimetes. Humble servant of the Lord our God and warrior in His name. Though my actions are feeble and prone to failure, I shall never falter in my call. I am pledged to combat those ideas that are rooted in mindsets that are contrary to my Master.
My name is outward proof of my promise to follow, closer and closer, the words and will of my Lord and Father.


note:
Vilisse is Quenya for a person's spirit or general personality.
Mimetes is Greek for an imitator or follower.

and so my spirit is one of a follower



Visit my revived, er.... dead blog! RSSharkey


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 Post subject: Re: The Equizack
PostPosted: November 12th, 2010, 10:55 am 
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Wow...he's in quite the predicament. You're doing a good job of satisfying my curiosity as regards him, though. =)

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