(edited June 17, 2010)

Versar is a rogue Osunan that offers his DNA robot technology to Lynl in exchange for a partnership in the eradication of mood disorders and DNA handicaps (chromosomal abnormalities before and after birth), with the hope of a super race that can be free from decay and inefficiencies within the genetic framework.

So Versar is the programmer and Lynl is the public image plus the specialist on neural pathways. When Versar has used Lynl for all he’s worth, he will kill him. Lynl can be the CEO and Versar can remain private and in control of programming, thus letting him create his subliminal mind control in secret.

Once nL Co. is established, they try to find a way to get rid of the pesky Arkun soldiers , who occupy this planet as protectors and enforcers of God’s Law and the Code of P.K. (planetary kingdoms).

Stage One in getting the Arakun (or Arkhun?) out of Ixia and eventually the planet (Kitane).
- Versar activates Arakhun soldiers under his control and has them commit heinous crimes to incite the people against them.
- Meanwhile, Versar pushes support to the army being trained in Ixia using nL, saying that a king on the other side of the galaxy doesn’t know how to rule this planet, it has changed too much since it was colonized a thousand years ago.

Stage Two
- Justus pulls out the Arakun troops because of the riots and not wanting to send in a brute force to take back control. He knows if he did that, the planet would never forget how many people would have to die in such a battle. He will pull back for now until he can figure out why so many of his soldiers are killing, committing terrorism, and worse.
- The Ixian Ambassador is killed by a Arakun soldier en route to a meeting with King Justus.
- War is declared by Ixia on the King. (Ixia is a powerhouse because of it’s size and Camil plant production which led to wealth and technology for war and transport through air and space, so while it cannot fight the collective galatical force of the Arakun, it can defend itself and cause terrible damage across this planet while Arakun organizes its forces. Also, the Arakun are in the midst of a battle against the Osuna across the galaxy, so their forces are limited in this “minor” skirmish (minor in comparison to the hundreds of planets King Justus rules over).

Stage Three
- Gain the support of the Kitane Alliance to let them rule this planet with troops in every country in exchange for access to nL. This arrangement would mean Ixian Commanders are in charge of every country’s military until only nL modified soldiers are deployed across the globe. The soldiers in these countries can either agree to the upgrade, at a large fee to their government (thereby increasing Ixian wealth and influence) or have them retire in the five year window when planetary defense switches to nL trained soldiers only.
- As soon as the Arakun leave the planet, Versar assumes they will never be able to retake it, and by the time they consider blowing it out of the sky (not wise option), the Ixian Force will be strong enough to fight to a draw, which is a non-option when Justus has to maintain his fight against the Osuna.


I've discovered Darin, my protagonist. I will post a first chapter excerpt of how he gets involved soon.

This sounds really interesting...I look forward to reading the chapter excerpt soon. Have you posted it yet?

eruheran

Now that I've finally read this, I'm fascinated by the historic structure of the post. But right now Timotheus and I have agreed that this post is old enough to be locked and archived.

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