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 Post subject: The Dwarves
PostPosted: October 24th, 2009, 11:02 am 
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The following text is an excerpt from the Annals of the Ring Wearers.

Description: The dwarves are humanoid creatures, resembling men except that they have short, often stubby, limbs.

History: The dwarves are humanoid, but much knowledge about their original origin was lost during the Cleansing. The dwarves maintain the belief that they are the descendants of the first two humanoids, as men and elves have. This belief has been challenged, but there is no evidence against it.

The scholars believe that dwarves are meant to represent the Priest personality of the Creator's Three Fold Person. This is made evident by the dwarves deep commitment to the preservation of the Covenant. They are currently the only people with a complete collection of the Covenant Documents, and although they allow people to copy or read them, they do not give the originals themselves. Dwarves, contrary to common belief, are far from crass. They, in fact, posses the most pure of all cultures, being resistant to the growing evil of the world. While they are indeed evil, like all humanoids, they are the least corrupted. They were blessed with the gift of perseverance. Dwarves are famed for their knowledge of the Rogim, gathered when an ancient dwarf captured a Rogim.

The dwarves maintain the most accurate knowledge of the world before the Cleansing. Should they ever perish, the loss of the world would be incalculable, and the wrath of the Creator equal to the Cleansing.

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Redemption is to be purchased, to have a price paid. So I was redeemed from my master sin, and from justice, which demanded my death. For He paid the price of sin by becoming sin, and met the demands of justice by dying for us.

For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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PostPosted: October 27th, 2009, 8:51 am 
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I am liking your world more and more. So your Cleansing is like the Deluge?


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The Cleansing is like the Deluge, but is not a global flood. It is some sort of global disaster, but I haven't determine exactly what. Some of the 'mystery' that I allow to surround events before the Cleansing is due to my lack of decision.

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I am Ebed Eleutheros, redeemed from slavery in sin to the bond-service of my Master, Jesus Christ.

Redemption is to be purchased, to have a price paid. So I was redeemed from my master sin, and from justice, which demanded my death. For He paid the price of sin by becoming sin, and met the demands of justice by dying for us.

For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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PostPosted: October 29th, 2009, 5:09 am 
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The Cleansing is like the Deluge, but is not a global flood. It is some sort of global disaster, but I haven't determine exactly what. Some of the 'mystery' that I allow to surround events before the Cleansing is due to my lack of decision.


Haha, yes. I was the same way until I figured it out. I did a deluge like on Earth, mainly because it made the most sense (God always does things right. :) ). I did a lot different around it, though, so it really is not repetitive, just God-honoring. :)


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Addition: On the Life-Span of Dwarves.

A dwarf will spend approximately ten to eleven months in the womb. Because of this extended period of development, dwarves are born with all of their bones, and learn to communicate more quickly than human children. It is not unusual for a dwarf child to beginning walking months before a human child born on the same date.

From birth to the fifth year of age, dwarf children are referred to (in the tongue of men) as "dwarvings," a term not unlike the word "toddler." At this age dwarf children learn of the dwarf culture through experiential learning. Dwarf children are not considered very impressionable and are therefore allowed more freedom to explore ideas and cultures than the children of the other peoples.

When a male dwarf child reaches his sixth year of age, his father and a group of five leaders from his fathers Covenant Body (not unlike our term "church body") will take him into the mountains for a week. During the fourth day of the week the child will go through a ritual circumcision. This period is a defining point in a he-dwarfs life, because the child and the elders will discuss the child's place in the Covenant, and his duties as an appointed priest of the LORD.

When the he-child returns from this ritual week, he will begin an in-depth study of the Covenant Documents, as well as the necessary arts of propers reading, writing, and effective speaking.

When the he-child reaches his eleventh year of age, one fourth of study time will be aimed at the study of manhood as defined by the Covenant Documents. He will continue this study officially until his twenty-first year of age, when all of his Covenant studies will become private and personal duties. From his twenty-first to thirty-first year of age, his official duties will be the studies of trades, history, and athletics, and the use and creation of weaponry. When he turns thirty-one his official education ends, and he is free to participate in the trade and work of the Covenant that he feels led to.

A he dwarf reaches physical maturity at approximately his twentieth year, and will maintain youthful vigor until approximately his three-hundredth year. After this point his life-span depends greatly on his eating and exercise habits, but he-dwarves generally die around their four-hundredth year.

I will post more about the life of she-dwarves later. Writing that wore me out! :)

Edit: Due to a lack of inspiration, tonight I will be posting on the appearance of dwarves.

Addition: On the Appearance of Dwarves

Male dwarves average a height of four feet, while female dwarves average a height of three and a half feet. (I'll calculate a metric measure if someone asks.)

It must be understood that dwarf culture never speaks of a persons physical appearance in terms beauty. In fact, the only terms that refer to a persons appearance as good or bad speak in terms of healthiness. Dwarves may speak of a persons appearance as being dark, or rough, or gentle, but never terms that measure good or bad. Dwarves only use terms of beauty or ugliness when speaking of works of art.

He-dwarves generally bald by the age of twenty, at which time their hair also begins to loose pigment, becoming gray and white. He-dwarves are known for their long beards and busy eyebrows, but while these may be the traditional style for a he-dwarf, such an appearance takes time to achieve, and great variance is observed in its various forms.

She-dwarves are less thick and stocky than he-dwarves, and never bald, although their hair looses its pigment slightly sooner that a he -dwarves. She-dwarves grow no facial hair except eyebrows, instead they grow long hair, and practice various ways of taking care of their hair.

While dwarves do not refer to people themselves as being beautiful or ugly, the may occasionally refer to modes of dress and styles of hair and beard in this way. These are considered basic art forms, and are treated with much cultural emphasis.

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I am Ebed Eleutheros, redeemed from slavery in sin to the bond-service of my Master, Jesus Christ.

Redemption is to be purchased, to have a price paid. So I was redeemed from my master sin, and from justice, which demanded my death. For He paid the price of sin by becoming sin, and met the demands of justice by dying for us.

For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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 Post subject: Re: The Dwarves
PostPosted: December 23rd, 2009, 4:14 pm 
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Wow. All of the races and creatures you have posted so far are really well thought out! I can't wait to hear more!

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 Post subject: Re: The Dwarves
PostPosted: January 16th, 2010, 7:10 pm 
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I Can see that Your Dwarves are the kind of allegorical jews or something similar. In My book the race that plays that part are the Gnomes, they are alike to Dwarves but they have many large differences; but they come from the same main family. I like how your Dwarvish culture is very thought out and detailed for it has been said that is what culture is detail after detail for years build culture. I am looking forward to reading more about your Dwarves

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 Post subject: Re: The Dwarves
PostPosted: January 16th, 2010, 9:46 pm 
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DrathsonofGrath wrote:
I Can see that Your Dwarves are the kind of alligorical jews or something similar.


Actually, my Dwarves are not supposed to be allegorical for the Jews. The Dwarves are in no way the "chosen people", but simply the chosen priests. You might say that the Dwarves are more an allegorical form of the house of Aaron, within the extended family of the "chosen people". This works because all of the humanoid people of my world (Dwarves, Elves, Men) descended from a now extinct "super race" of sorts. Each people maintained a certain aspect. The Dwarves kept the hardy traits, the Elves kept the original long life, and men are consider to posses the greatest share of traits from the original species. All of theses people descend from the original "chosen people" which is now a much wider range of persons.

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I am Ebed Eleutheros, redeemed from slavery in sin to the bond-service of my Master, Jesus Christ.

Redemption is to be purchased, to have a price paid. So I was redeemed from my master sin, and from justice, which demanded my death. For He paid the price of sin by becoming sin, and met the demands of justice by dying for us.

For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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PostPosted: January 16th, 2010, 10:09 pm 
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Very cool and very very interesting! Superfascinating a little like how Adam was and and over time we came into sort of families with dominant genes(e.g. skin pigmentation)I cannot wait until I can read that book!!

P.S. That's why I said something similar ;)

P.P.S I understand your originality and I am not trying to group your story into any one group or allegorical view

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 Post subject: Re: The Dwarves
PostPosted: January 16th, 2010, 11:00 pm 
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DrathsonofGrath wrote:
P.P.S I understand your originality and I am not trying to group your story into any one group or allegorical view.


Don't worry, I could tell. I just wanted to clarify, and actually, you helped me formulate my ideas even more!

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I am Ebed Eleutheros, redeemed from slavery in sin to the bond-service of my Master, Jesus Christ.

Redemption is to be purchased, to have a price paid. So I was redeemed from my master sin, and from justice, which demanded my death. For He paid the price of sin by becoming sin, and met the demands of justice by dying for us.

For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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PostPosted: January 17th, 2010, 11:16 am 
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That's great!(If its possible you could make it any more detailed ;) )

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