I like your first one, Bethy.

He needed the memory he'd forgotten.

The life he required, she held.

The curse alighted for good reason.

His smile at her was heartbreaking.

Thank you, Busheh. I like this one:



Let's see here... * comes up with a few for fun *

To win, she must first lose.

Her only friend, his life fading.

The dragon slept, unaware of danger.

He did not heed her warning.

When she calls, you must answer.

And the gold turned to ashes.

The wound would never heal; ever.

They had failed, failed their creator.

They gave their lives for ours.

That is how are here today.

Those are all good, BushMaid.

Thankyou, Jonathan.


This has a great premise.

Premise... *blinks*
*remembers what it means*
*smacks self in face*
You are a writer Svensteel! You should know what every word in the dictionary means!
(It's late for me... I've been dancing all day; so I'm tired Lol!)
Thank 'ye Bushy!

Here are some random six word stories:

She never knew who rescued her.

The last secret letter told all.

The dead man had a plan.

Thank you, Inesdar.

My favorite of yours is:

Though I kind of like this one, too, for some reason.

Funny you should like that one.

Those are good ones, Jonathan and Inesdar! Jonathan, I especially like
Good premise there.

Thank you, BushMaid.

A gun. A knife. A body.

He awoke, shivering, in a dungeon.

A scream. Then it went black.

The pirate's skeleton began to dance.

I think I'm going to like this topic.

These are some six word-ers I found in an old note book of mine:

Murder on 2nd street
"I told you, I want candy!"

Youtube
I thought nobody would see it.

The final coming
"Well, you won't see that twice."

I should make some that are not over a year old.

Definitely. They're fun to read.

That's an interesting one.


Those two are funny.

Thanks. It might could go places if I did a pirate/Three Musketeers/fantasy sorta deal...

Thanks.

Definitely.

Chuckling at the YouTube one.

Those are good.

Thanks.

Maybe someday one or two of them will turn into a book.

He despaired, but could not die.

Broken body hid a broken soul.

He lived, he loved, he died.


Some of those might be similar to ones already done...I don't remember.

I like this one;


Variant;

I had a specific character in mind when I wrote that one. Your variant is good, too, though.

Aye, I thought as much! Just my two cents!
Variant; two dimes.


Money; lost. By selfishly getting more.

The man found the monster; himself.

Nice.

Thanks!

This one sounds like it has some potential. I like it!

Nice!

I echo the praise on the second sentence, Michael. I can think of several Bible verses to go with the first.

Well thanks Crush and Phili!

Those are awesome Sven and Miss Leandra!

Thanks, Crush and Aele.

They were all dead. Excepts one.

One million voices. All calling him.

The cave was full of bones.

Maybe next time one of them will be cheerful.

Haha. Cheerful tends to be a lot harder than dark.


I like this one.

So it does.

Thanks. It's certainly an...interesting thought.

Ooh, I like this one. Very good plot starter, methinks...

Thank you! Maybe someday.

These are great!

Thanks!

Those are great, Crushmaster! Here's a few:

His life was not worth living.

She wished upon a shooting star.

Hope was lost. Never again found.

Thank you! I like yours, too.

Here's a few more. Let's see what we get...

Her cries were unheeded by all.

The old statue began to cry.

The dusty, antiquated mirrors showed all.

A wraith passed through the hall.

Rattling, ghostly chains - everywhere. Then silence.

Thanks! I like this one. Here's one more:

His life edged on her unspoken words.

That one's good, excepts it's seven, not six words.

Hmm...Not sure of a good way to change it, though...

That is good, sis! Let me see if I can fix it...


Hrm, the only way to do it is without the "her" but it doesn't seem as dramatic without it...

Indeed...

Oh well, it's good whether or not it fits.

Thanks, Bush and Crushmaster!

Oh wow, this is a really good one. Me likes.

Thanks. Last night, I made a picture with flames and a chessboard, and that's gotten me thinking about doing a book idea with chess as a major (*cough*) player.

In fact, the picture may become my new avatar...

Sounds like a book I'd read and then give to my chess-playing brother.