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PostPosted: February 22nd, 2011, 1:41 pm 
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There's a Hemingway challenge and a haiku challenge. I thought we needed a rhyming couplet challenge!

In example:

My favorite part of the book
Is the logline, or the hook

Both lines have six words and rhyme. You don't have to have the same amount of words, though.

Rhyme away!

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Wow, that was great!
Now I must create.

Are there supposed to be six words? Or any amount?

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Elanhil wrote:
Wow, that was great!
Now I must create.

Are there supposed to be six words? Or any amount?

However many words you want,
In any color, size, or font

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This reminds me of the time
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PostPosted: February 22nd, 2011, 4:30 pm 
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Riniel Jasmina wrote:
This reminds me of the time
I entered rap battles online.

That sounds like fun!
Where was that one?

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PostPosted: February 22nd, 2011, 8:58 pm 
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This game sounds like lots of fun,
And as for questions I should ask some;

How many lines are we allowed to write?
Is there a limit or do we go all night?

Also is there a particular theme?
Or can we write what we happen to dream?

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PostPosted: February 22nd, 2011, 9:10 pm 
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I hope this doesn't sound obtuse
But I'm beginning to feel like Dr. Seuss

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PostPosted: February 22nd, 2011, 9:23 pm 
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Oh my goodness, what did you say?!
If that is the case, I should leave right away:

To offend is not what this rhyme should deploy;
But for me, Dr Seuss I do not enjoy.

But on the bright side, I must see:
At least there's no cat in a hat for me!

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PostPosted: February 23rd, 2011, 6:06 am 
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I must completely agree
Dr. Seuss is not for me

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PostPosted: February 23rd, 2011, 6:59 am 
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Wait, aren't the two lines supposed to have the same amount of words, or did I read that wrong?

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PostPosted: February 23rd, 2011, 3:38 pm 
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Riniel Jasmina wrote:
I hope this doesn't sound obtuse
But I'm beginning to feel like Dr. Seuss


Fantastic.

(And the first word that came to mind that rhymed with that was "caustic" and then "elastic"...)

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Elanhil wrote:
Wait, aren't the two lines supposed to have the same amount of words, or did I read that wrong?


No, there is no limit to words we can use
The word count is up to you to choose.

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PostPosted: February 24th, 2011, 7:33 am 
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Oh, of that I was not aware.
Now I can write without a care!

:rofl:

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PostPosted: February 24th, 2011, 3:42 pm 
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Hahaha! :rofl:

I am writing a rhyme just for fun,
Line number two, and now it is done.

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PostPosted: February 26th, 2011, 2:53 am 
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Now that there's a challenge for lines that rhyme
Let's hope no one starts rhyming all the time

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PostPosted: February 26th, 2011, 6:39 am 
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Don't go holding your breath about that;
It is so easy to rhyme off the bat. :D

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PostPosted: February 26th, 2011, 12:41 pm 
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BushMaid wrote:
Don't go holding your breath about that;
It is so easy to rhyme off the bat. :D


'That' does not exactly rhyme with :D .
If you think it does, that must be a myth. :rofl:

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Elanhil wrote:
BushMaid wrote:
Don't go holding your breath about that;
It is so easy to rhyme off the bat. :D


'That' does not exactly ryhme with :D .
If you think it does, that must be a myth. :rofl:


Nor does :D rhyme with :rofl:

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PostPosted: February 26th, 2011, 5:05 pm 
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Jonathan Garner wrote:
Now that there's a challenge for lines that rhyme
Let's hope no one starts rhyming all the time

BushMaid wrote:
Don't go holding your breath about that;
It is so easy to rhyme off the bat. :D

What a frightening thing to contemplate
I hope we escape such a crazy fate

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PostPosted: February 26th, 2011, 5:13 pm 
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I should go and take up the dare,
And go post a rhyme everywhere!

:D

*puts smiley below rhyme so she is not accused of rhyming smilies*

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PostPosted: February 26th, 2011, 7:30 pm 
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BushMaid wrote:
*puts smiley below rhyme so she is not accused of rhyming smilies*

That is sort of a rhyme, if you
Divide the one line into two

Observe:

BushMaid wrote:
*puts smiley below rhyme so she
Is not accused of rhyming smilies*

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PostPosted: February 27th, 2011, 12:55 am 
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Why how ironic, I see that it's true:
But rhyming lines are so easy to do-

I can come up with rhymes straight off the cuff,
So you may want to tell me when you've had enough.

:D :D

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PostPosted: February 27th, 2011, 1:34 am 
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Inside this challenge thread, rhyming can be fun
But outside the thread, it just shouldn't be done

This next rhyme is random and straight out of the blue
It's not about anyone--not them, me, or you

There is a thin line--and it is hazy
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What's so bad about crazy? It has been confessed,
If one is found crazy, they write novels the best.

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PostPosted: February 27th, 2011, 8:27 am 
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Now this is weird, I never thought
I'd be rhyming rhymes about the Google [Bot]

But here I am and here I stay
Oh my, I'm having so much fun today!

These rhymes really do addict
But with my schedule they do conflict

And so, to save some time,
I'm afraid I must cease my rhyme

But I shall return another day
To stay with y'all and play!
Okay?

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PostPosted: February 27th, 2011, 9:16 am 
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Rhyming is fun
As is a poem, or a pun

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PostPosted: February 27th, 2011, 9:24 pm 
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Jonathan Garner wrote:
Elanhil wrote:
BushMaid wrote:
Don't go holding your breath about that;
It is so easy to rhyme off the bat. :D


'That' does not exactly ryhme with :D .
If you think it does, that must be a myth. :rofl:


Nor does :D rhyme with :rofl:

:roll:
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PostPosted: February 28th, 2011, 9:14 pm 
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The question concerns the semantics of 'smiley'
When the truth of the matter is, you see
Not very important at all
(If you'd like to debate, please give me a call!)

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PostPosted: February 28th, 2011, 9:19 pm 
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I think this thread was for words that rhyme,
But smilies: that's for another time.

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Smilies seem to make some people confused
So perhaps, therefore, they should not be used

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But smilies animate my face,
That you cannot see from your place.

But I guess, if you must insist,
I will refrain, I will resist;

Not to use a smile so cheery,
And end this rhyme oh so dreary.

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Smilies are just fine, and animated you may be
It just seems wise not to end a line with a smilie

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The sky outside is dull and grey,
Perfect weather to go out and play.

I wish that I was young again for a day,
And relive the days I knew how to play.

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BushMaid wrote:
The sky outside is dull and grey,
Perfect weather to go out and play.

I wish that I was young again for a day,
And relive the days I knew how to play.
I like this one...

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Thanks, Elanhill. :) I was thinking it at the time.

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PostPosted: March 4th, 2011, 10:06 am 
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The first thing I would like to say,
Is please do not ask me to go away.

I know my rhymes may not be smart
But they are spoken from my heart.

Some famous rhymes are now the stuff of dreams,
Like diamond necklaces or strawberry creams.

Others are written for people to see
Translated into languages for many a country.

So depise not these beginnings of mine which are small;
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*claps* That's really good, Spirit!

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*cough*
We ARE supposed to be doing these verses in rhyme
Besides, Elanhil, isn't it about time
That you posted a verse of your own?
We've heard lots, now we're ready to be shown.

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Hey, BushMaid, do you remember the time
When RedOwl introduced herself, and asked us to rhyme?
You made a nice rhyme, but it was welcoming me,
And it caused you embarrassed to be.

I barely knew you way back then.
Now I think of you as a friend.
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My lovely Aemi, almost a tear
You bring to my eyes, sweet dear!
An expert poet are you, I see;
Do accept this one from me!

And yes Elanhil, I think it's bout time
To hear from you a lengthy rhyme.
I haven't heard your skills just yet;
But I'm sure it wouldn't be one to forget!

:D

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PostPosted: March 28th, 2011, 11:56 pm 
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An expert poet? I'm not sure that's true.
I don't think that I'm any better than you.
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PostPosted: March 29th, 2011, 12:00 am 
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We are all experts in some degree,
I guess that makes an expert of you and me.

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PostPosted: June 22nd, 2011, 10:23 am 
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BushMaid wrote:
We are all experts in some degree,
I guess that makes an expert of you and me.

:D


Well I am late for this rhyming game,
So lesser then yours is my rhyming name,
But still I will at least hope to succeed,
In making a rhyme, a quite simple deed.

So here I go again, still writing away,
Even how good it is, I couldn't say,
But I will still write rhymes, with fingers like fire.
But after a while, my fingers are sure to tire.

Did I do it right? :dieshappy:

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PostPosted: August 19th, 2011, 11:50 am 
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What a wonderful thread to start,
Oh, Elly, you are so smart!

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PostPosted: August 19th, 2011, 2:03 pm 
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This reminds me of the days,
Not long ago,
Filled with rap battle ways,
Ah the rhymes we could flow.
It's interesting really,
Once you have practice,
Your lines form ideally,
With no mental fracas.

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PostPosted: August 19th, 2011, 2:55 pm 
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Yes, it is fun.
Almost like a pun.
:rofl:

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PostPosted: August 19th, 2011, 3:15 pm 
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I sort of want to join this thread,
But into the world of rhymes I fear to tread,
You all seem to write without a thought,
I, on the other hand, do not,
It seems to me that my rhymes aren't great,
And because of that "I'm sorry" I say,
But I just couldn't resist,
Attempting to awake the fun I have missed,
All right, this post is getting quite long,
Thus I shall leave you all with lyrics to a song,
I hope your days go oh so well,
And now I say "So long; farewell!"


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PostPosted: August 19th, 2011, 5:17 pm 
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Lyrics from The Sound of Music are often said
On HW, thus putting the songs in my head

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