Thanks Lady Terra and Armorbearer

Since I posted that first summary, the story has changed in scope a little. I have pushed forward the beginning of the book so that I can encompass more exploration of the home planet instead of having such a large chunk on the moon (Solus). I have also decided to go through some plot and character arcs and outlines before starting this. I never did this on my first book and am wishing I did with how difficult the edit is going.
This time I am trying to figure out my ending first and make everything build towards that, as well as having a plan for each character's arc towards their goal. I have a twist that I've figured out how to introduce at the beginning and a ticking time bomb in the works to introduce as well, per my resources: 21 Days to a Novel by Michael Stackpole and The Art and Craft of Writing Christian Fiction by Jeff Gerke.
I am charting my journey writing this book on my website if you want to stop by and discuss.