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	| Dri | 
				
				
					|  Post subject: Ateuwa's Essence  Posted:  May 26th, 2011, 6:26 pm  |  | 
		
		
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					| I finished this one recently... it's my second essence map. 
 BODY {Hair [Color (Blonde
 ...........................<Faded yellow car>
 ............................<Melted vanilla ice cream>)]
 {Eyes [Color (Hazel
 ................................<Shadows>
 .............................<Melted Hershey's Chocolate bar>)]
 [Depth (Deep
 .................................<The deepest ocean>
 ..................................<Outer space>)]
 [Smile (Kind/Outgoing/Gorgeous
 .............................<A butterfly's open wings>
 ....................................<Assorted colors of leaves on trees, reflecting on a crystal clear lake>)]
 {Lips [Color (Pink
 ...............................<Sparkling ice>
 .................................<Flamingo's feathers>)]
 {Motion [Grace (Very smooth
 .................................<A swan swimming in the water>
 ...................................<Ice skating on fresh ice>)]
 [Speed {Average 75 %
 .........................................<A sprinter placing 3rd>
 ..............................................<A horse trotting>)]
 [Strength (Average 70 %
 ...........................................<Lifting weights for a year>
 ........................................<A karate blue belt>)]
 [Beauty (Above average 100 %
 .................................<Everything beautiful put into one scene>
 .......................................<Pure white snow with no footprints>)]
 {Spirit [Loyalty (Hard to earn
 ..............................<The wolf in Dances With Wolves>
 .......................................<A thief trying to pay for an apple>)]
 {Fear [Aspects (None
 ...............................<A dragon fighting a bear>)]
 {Mind [Clarity (Clear
 ..............................<Glass newly cleaned>)]
 [Knowledge (Above average 95 %
 ..................................<A scholar's mind>
 .............................<A fourth year college kid>)]
 ...........{Logic [About emotions/morals (Below average 45 %
 ...........................<Knowing the very basics of web design>
 ................................<Taking square dance lessons for the first time>)]
 ......................[About battle strategy (Average 50 %
 .............................<Winning third place in a chess tournament>
 .......................................<Winning Stratego>)]
 {Soul [Depth (Very deep 100 %
 ............................<Black hole>)]
 .........{Longing [For riches (Non-Existent 0 %
 ...........................<A blind man wanting to lose his cane>
 .........................<Someone poor wanting less>)]
 .........................[For love/family (A lot 95 %
 ............................<A husband's love for his wife>
 ...................................<The love we have for the USA>)]}
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 Would a fly without wings be called a walk?
 
 Holy Worlds Sci-Fi: Wrutho
 
 
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	| Lady Elanor | 
				
				
					|  Post subject: Re: Ateuwa's Essence  Posted:  May 27th, 2011, 10:54 am  |  | 
		
		
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					| Well done, Dri! Just remember, I don't think you're supposed to use colours in your metaphors, rather try and describe it in a different way. I'm not very good at doing these kind of essence maps, so am not sure about that though!
 
 'A butterfly's open wings.' I love that one!
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 All that is gold does not glitter,
 Not all those who wander are lost;
 The old that is strong does not wither,
 Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
 
 From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
 A light from the shadows shall spring;
 Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
 The crownless again shall be king
 
 J. R. R. Tolkien
 
 My favourite quote: "God will give His kindness for you to use when your own runs out."
 
 Pippin's Waggy Tales
 
 Autumn Leaves
 
 
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					|  Post subject: Re: Ateuwa's Essence  Posted:  May 27th, 2011, 6:26 pm  |  | 
		
		
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					| Thanks! Neither am I, really. I had a little help. _________________
 Would a fly without wings be called a walk?
 
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