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 Post subject: The Kiane
PostPosted: March 6th, 2010, 1:57 pm 
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It has long legs covered with soft brown fur, covering its feet, also. Its fur extends a little bit past halfway up its stomach and back, and just a little past those points on its sides. The rest of its body is green.

It has arms and five fingers, like a human (but its arms are a little bit thicker), and its neck is very long and thin, supporting a large, round head. It has no hair, and one large eye in its head with a cat-like pupil (and no coloration, just the black pupil and the white of its eye).

They live for an exceedingly long time, a little more than 170 years. However, they're close to dying out completely, since they can be rather gullible. But they are very gentle.

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Yes. They rarely get upset or angry.

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Very interesting...I'm not sure, are they cute and cuddly, or ugly?

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Mmm.... I wouldn't call them cute, but I wouldn't call them ugly, either. They're kinda in the middle, I guess. They could be cute and cuddly (or at least just cuddly), but that might be a bit awkward for both parties, but maybe not cute... I can try and upload a picture of the one I drew, if I didn't make any sense.

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 Post subject: Re: The Kiane
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My sister would probably say they are so ugly they're cute.
Do they ever fight for anything? Can they be used as pets or are they to big?

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I don't think they're that ugly. (I've created uglier ;).)

Mmmm, so far, no, they haven't fought for anything, except maybe survival. As far as anyone knows, there is only one (however, in another story in which the Kiane comes in, at the end there are three others). So their numbers are alarmingly low, and, consequently, they try not to fight anything.

No, they couldn't be kept as pets. They speak English, so maybe they could be considered a race, as well as a creature. But no, as pets, I suppose they may find it insulting. They're about the size of a of a young adult male, more or less.

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Okay, thanks!

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