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 Post subject: My first try at essence Tanner Emory Grayson
PostPosted: December 19th, 2010, 9:33 pm 
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Pardon my formatting, I haven't quite got the hang of this yet.

Tanner{

-Body[
--Eyes(
---<Hazel>
---->a green pool infused with gold<
---->sunshine through a gray cloud<
---<repressed>
---->stone walls<
---<understanding>
---->an orphan looking at a lost puppy<
--Hair(
---<ash brown>
---<crew cut>
--Build(
---<broad>
---<a supporting pillar>
--Height(
---<6 feet tall>
---<upright stature>
--Face(
---<roman nose>
---<square chin>
---<strong>
--Skin(
---<rugged>
---<fawn colored>

-Personality[
--Protective(
---<Eldest brother>
---<Human shield>
--Leadership(
---<First in a charge>
--Outdoing(
---<The life of the party>
--Loyal(
---<A wolf>
---<A slave>
--Ambitious(
---<an ant>
--Candid(
---<Straightforward>
--Courageous(
---<Undaunted>
--Decisive(
---<An avalanche>
--Enduring(
---<A young oak>
--Forgiving(
---<Reluctant>
--Proud(
---<slow to accept correction>
---<A mountain>
--Realistic(
---<The glass is just half>
--Respectful(
---<Gentleman>
---<Youngest son>
--Confident(
--Self-disciplined(
---<The rising of the sun>

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 Post subject: Re: My first try at essence Tanner Emory Grayson
PostPosted: December 19th, 2010, 11:57 pm 
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Riniel!!! I'm so excited! I've been lurking here waiting for you to post this! Great job! Don't worry, you'll get the hang of it. ;) I still am! ^^

I like your character. I especially like how you compared ambitious to "an ant" and realistic to "a glass just half." :)

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 Post subject: Re: My first try at essence Tanner Emory Grayson
PostPosted: December 21st, 2010, 8:34 pm 
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Thanks :) It was between that and say what my friend does: What glass?

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Words are my ̶bread and ̶butter.
http://unshakablegirl.com/
http://www.ravelry.com/designers/kitra-skene

Haud Retene Haud Reverte

All resemblance to persons, people, friends, relatives, quotes, cultures, artificial intelligences, inside jokes, pets, unclaimed personalities, sentient objects, extra-terrestrials, inter-terrestrials, and draperies living, dead, undead, or comatose in any of my work are purely coincidental, incidental, circumstantial, inadvertent, unplanned, unforeseen, and unintentional. There's seriously no way I was referring to you. Honest.

The story so far:
Birthright: Eleventh chapter pending. 28280 words.
Heritage: First chapter drafted.
Legacy: Character and plot development stage.
Get a feel for the land. Visit Lor-Amar today!

Other novels on the brain:
Quicksilver
Shen'oh Story
Crusoe's Star
War Blazer
Seven Arts Story
The Queen's Knave
Polarians
Exile Realms
All Librarians Are Secret Agents


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 Post subject: Re: My first try at essence Tanner Emory Grayson
PostPosted: February 16th, 2011, 10:44 pm 
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Beautiful, Riniel! You will get the hang of it! No worries!

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