Jakorosin Darksbane wrote:
I think the really pertinent question here is: are you firmly determined that the novel needs to only have two POVs?
And a question to contrast Jak's (;)): are you determined that the reader needs to know that much?
In an epic fantasy, often the only way to make the narrative at all coherent to the reader is to use various POV's. However in other kinds of stories, or even in some epics, one of the charms is to not know some things, and explanation, when necessary, can be kept to a minimum as well. Not knowing everything is sometimes one of the charms of a story, because it forces the reader to be even more in tune with what the main POV (or POV's) is thinking and understanding.
Lyza wrote:
I could simply switch persons and include someone else when the situation arises, however I think that would make the writing too choppy, so some major events of the story are heard through letters or word of mouth.
I agree that just swapping POV whenever it seems convenient can end up choppy. I have seen it done pretty well... but it has to fit with the book and what is best with the book's essence.
Jakorosin Darksbane wrote:
Switching persons shouldn't make the writing too choppy; so long as you have a 'set' of POV characters and stick with them.
A 'set' of POV characters is easiest to keep a good grip on, I agree.
But, also, if you are going to use a POV just once, I think it's best to limit the amount of time you spend in it, or else it brings up expectations with the reader that it's going to come back later.
Lyza wrote:
Any words of wisdom regarding how to handle writing a dual-perspective novel?
Make sure to keep a good balance between them.
