Kendri's Essence

Evening L. Aspen · **Joined:** December 2nd, 2009, 11:01 pm **Posts:** 1461

This is not my first essence map, but it's my first map to post here. I'm not quite finished with it (I need to add more under "Spirit"), but please let me know what you think of it so far.

Kendri
Body {
Eyes [
Color (
< sea foam >
< young bamboo shoots >
< pale green opals >)
Sparkle (
< ready for adventure >
< the north star >
< a playful kitten >)
Gaze (
< curious affection >
< a golden retriever pup >
< melts the hardest of hearts >)]
Expression [
Smile (
< seemingly eternal >)]
Hair [
Color (
< morning sunshine >
< flaxen >)]
Movement [
Grace (
< a bird flitting between branches >
< a butterfly >
< daisies in the wind >)
Speed (
< a parakeet >
< a paper airplane zipping across a classroom >)]}

Spirit {
< a healed wound >
Heart [
Innocence (
< a white lily >
< a newborn filly >
< a miniature rose bud >)
Purity (
< a white sheet of canvas >)
Joy (
< a child at Christmastime >
< a new Christian >
< Arctic summers >)
Hope (
< the water cycle >)]}

~ Evening

Elanhil · **Posted:** September 1st, 2010, 4:55 am

I like the paper airplane analogy.

It looks good to me, but then again, I wouldn't ask me as I'm still new to essence.

Andrew Amnon Mimetes · **Joined:** May 14th, 2010, 4:43 am **Posts:** 4458

< melts the hardest of hearts >

Melted mine! Probably my favorite character on here yet.

But I really like Janin of Yen's Telvia too...anyways, really good essence map! I really liked your metaphors.

eruheran

Elanhil · **Posted:** September 1st, 2010, 5:59 am

eruheeran wrote:

< melts the hardest of hearts >

Melted mine! Probably my favorite character on here yet.

But I really like Janin of Yen's Telvia too...anyways, really good essence map! I really liked your metaphrori

eruheran

Wait...HOW DID YOU SEE HER GAZE???

I also like this character, along with Tynx.

What's Kendri's upbringing like?

Evening L. Aspen · **Joined:** December 2nd, 2009, 11:01 pm **Posts:** 1461

Elanhil wrote:

What's Kendri's upbringing like?

She was orphaned at age four and went to live in an orphanage, where she was cared for by Tamera (my main character). Kendri was very sad (but still sweet) after her parents died, but after a while, and with Tamera's help, she became her normal self again. (Which is not to say that she never misses her parents, because she does.)

Thanks for the compliments on the essence map.

Elanhil · **Posted:** September 1st, 2010, 10:28 pm

Ooh, interesting and sad story. Has Tamera adopted many, or is Kendri a first?

Evening L. Aspen · **Joined:** December 2nd, 2009, 11:01 pm **Posts:** 1461

Tamera hasn't really adopted her (Tamera doesn't run the orphanage). The orphanage has a sort of buddy system where an older child takes care of one or two younger ones. And Kendri was her first buddy.

Elanhil · **Posted:** September 1st, 2010, 10:32 pm

Oh, Tamera is an orphan too?

Evening L. Aspen · **Joined:** December 2nd, 2009, 11:01 pm **Posts:** 1461

Elanhil wrote:

Oh, Tamera is an orphan too?

Yep.

Oh, and I added a couple more lines to the bottom of the map.

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