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| Author: | Varon [ October 13th, 2018, 10:42 am ] |
| Post subject: | Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
Hey, y'all! I'm working on a linked story collection for a practicum this semester and (despite the burnout) am trying to start arranging things so I have the general idea for the order of stories. What suggestions do you have for arranging stories? Have you done any collections like these? Or have you read any linked collections of fantasy stories? |
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| Author: | Rachel Newhouse [ October 13th, 2018, 11:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
Yes, I've done a few short story and poetry collections, as well as some plot prompt and recipe books where a bunch of loosely-related content had to be ordered. Two questions... 1) What were the criteria for the short stories being included in the book? They're all fantasy, of course, but was there any other unifying theme? Are they all your short stories? Were they all written at the same time, or in the same universe? List any qualifiers you can think of for each piece, because it will help you in making your decision. 2) Is your book going to be divided into any subsections, or is that something you're open to? The reason I ask is because you may consider looking for sub-themes within the work and grouping it that way. If you have some that are more on the horror-fantasy end, and some on the humor-fantasy end, you'll want to group those together under a subheader so the change in tone makes sense. If they're all set in the same universe, you could group the stories by focus character, race, region, era, events in the timeline, etc. If those more concrete distinctions fail, what I'd do is read each story and rate the "emotion" of the piece. Is it a happy, fast-paced piece? Is it a slow, world-building piece? Does it end on a tragic note? A heroic note? Write out the emotional "roller coaster" for each story--draw little pictographs if you have to! Then look at each piece and arrange them so the overall emotional progression follows roughly what a full-length novel would. Basically what I'm saying is that you want to use the emotional tones of each piece to play off of each other. If your audience reads the whole book in one sitting, you don't want to disrupt the flow by putting the most climatic stories at the beginning and the most trifling at the back. You want to start on a slower, world-building note and end on a heroic one. So if you put a few more humorous stories that introduce characters in the beginning, then some mixed ones that expose details and villains and twists in the middle, and then your most emotionally impacting ones at the end, you'll have mirrored the general progression of a novel. You can then repeat the same process between each story. If you have one story that ends on a real sober, tragic ending, you probably don't want to open the next chapter with a tongue-in-cheek, irreverent story. The key is to reread your collection--or have someone else read it--once you've ordered it and see if any of the emotional "leaps" break the "magic" of the book, or if they help keep the reader immersed. |
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| Author: | Varon [ October 15th, 2018, 7:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
Really? I didn't know you'd done anthologies before. Which ones are they? As for this collection, they are all fantasy stories that I've written and they all occur within the setting of Laeonesse within a time period of a few months. So, they sort of show a build up to a larger plot that occurs after the events of the stories. I also have a compiler's persona who has is recording the stories and putting them together to record his people's stories in the face of potential cultural annihilation, so that's the character motivations. I hadn't figured on sub-sections, since they all concern the same themes and events, but I'm not opposed to dividing them further. The emotions are a good idea, although I think they'll have similar emotional feels, to an extent. |
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| Author: | Rachel Newhouse [ October 15th, 2018, 10:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
Well, both of the HW anthologies for starters...  Would your compiler arrange stories strictly chronologically? Or would he be more likely to group by person, or another method? Since you have the benefit of creating a character for him, hone in on his personality. You know his motivations--so that's a great start. But what kind of person is he? Is he a professional compiler? Just doing this to preserve his people's heritage? Is he organized? How much time has he had to work on this? |
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| Author: | Varon [ October 18th, 2018, 6:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
Oh yeah, I forgot you were involved with those. That does make a good point. Hmm. Those are good thoughts, although tricky, since he's writing them in a cave in the mountains in a language not his native, and in a rush since there is a sizable price on his head. So that's a bit of an unusual set of circumstances for compiling a book. 
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| Author: | Rachel Newhouse [ October 18th, 2018, 10:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
In that case, you could do them chronologically (in the order that he scribbled them down), with some notes about how many days he's been hiding, how close he is to starving to death...
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| Author: | Varon [ October 22nd, 2018, 12:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
That's true! I could definitely do that. Would make things really interesting in the value that he's putting on these stories. |
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| Author: | Rachel Newhouse [ October 23rd, 2018, 10:35 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
Varon wrote: That's true! I could definitely do that. Would make things really interesting in the value that he's putting on these stories. Do it.  I'd read a book like that.
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| Author: | Varon [ October 26th, 2018, 5:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Arranging stories in a linked short story collection |
Lucky you! I should be putting a book together and releasing it in the next year or two. |
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