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Author:  Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ June 15th, 2013, 12:21 pm ]
Post subject:  The Dedication

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The short story book and this contest are being organized as a prison outreach program. I intend to dedicate the book to Jay Lauser, and I intend to do my best to find a way to get it into jails and prisons.


Somehow I forgot about this detail... I'm trying to work on my foreward, so does anyone else want to take a stab at the wording of the dedication?

Author:  Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ June 19th, 2013, 5:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

Okay, fine. I'll do it. Pick the one you like best.

This Anthology
Is Lovingly Dedicated
to Jaymes Darren Lauser

Dedicated
With Hope and Prayers
To Jay

Dedicated to Sir Emeth Mimetes
Our Founder and Friend

(See, we also have to pick a variation on his name, which is probably a choice best left to his family maybe?)

Author:  Lady Elanor [ June 19th, 2013, 6:06 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

I like all of them. Which doesn't help, does it!

I like the second and third because they sound like they are written to a friend, whereas the first sounds more formal. Those are my initial thoughts anyway. :) So it just depends on how you want it to sound, if you're wanting it to be more formal I'd go with the first; I like with 'with hope and prayers' part of the second one. :)

Author:  Constable Jaynin Mimetes [ June 19th, 2013, 7:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

We can do this:

Dedicated with Hope and Prayers
To Sir Emeth Mimetes
Our Founder and Friend

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ June 19th, 2013, 7:23 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

I like:

Dedicated With Hope and Prayers
To Sir Emeth Mimetes, Our Friend

Author:  Mistress Kidh [ June 20th, 2013, 6:03 am ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

Airianna Valenshia wrote:
I like:

Dedicated With Hope and Prayers
To Sir Emeth Mimetes, Our Friend

I think this one is my favorite so far.

Author:  Lady Elanor [ June 21st, 2013, 6:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

Lady Rwebhu Kidh wrote:
Airianna Valenshia wrote:
I like:

Dedicated With Hope and Prayers
To Sir Emeth Mimetes, Our Friend

I think this one is my favorite so far.


Yes, I am liking this one as well. :)

Author:  Aragorn [ June 21st, 2013, 10:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

Lady Elanor Mimetes wrote:
Lady Rwebhu Kidh wrote:
Airianna Valenshia wrote:
I like:

Dedicated With Hope and Prayers
To Sir Emeth Mimetes, Our Friend

I think this one is my favorite so far.


Yes, I am liking this one as well. :)

I like that one, too.

Author:  Ophelia MirZA Mimetes [ June 22nd, 2013, 10:52 am ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

Jonathan Garner wrote:
Lady Elanor Mimetes wrote:
Lady Rwebhu Kidh wrote:
Airianna Valenshia wrote:
I like:

Dedicated With Hope and Prayers
To Sir Emeth Mimetes, Our Friend

I think this one is my favorite so far.


Yes, I am liking this one as well. :)

I like that one, too.


*Agrees*

Author:  Aldara [ June 22nd, 2013, 4:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

Ophelia MirZA Mimetes wrote:
Jonathan Garner wrote:
Lady Elanor Mimetes wrote:
Lady Rwebhu Kidh wrote:
Airianna Valenshia wrote:
I like:

Dedicated With Hope and Prayers
To Sir Emeth Mimetes, Our Friend

I think this one is my favorite so far.


Yes, I am liking this one as well. :)

I like that one, too.


*Agrees*

*joins the agreeing crowd*

Author:  Lady Vilisse Mimetes [ June 23rd, 2013, 4:42 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

"Dedicated With Hope and Prayers
To Sir Emeth Mimetes, Our Friend"

I'm gonna run with this is the one we all like ;)

Author:  Suiauthon Mimetes [ June 23rd, 2013, 4:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

Good idea. ;)

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ June 23rd, 2013, 4:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dedication

*is so excited between the book cover, the dedication, the foreword, and the content! *

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