Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Justice is—the punishment of the guilty, deserved rewards, a righteous God; the absence of mercy.
I do realize that it is alright technically speaking.... But one of the things I most love about God's ways is his ability to exercise mercy and justice at once. The statement 'Justice is the absence of mercy' I think could be replaced with something better.
Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Hope is—a quiet faith in things unseen, a chance to turn your life around; the will to continue.
Maybe 'quiet' could be changed for something more general? 'Steadfast' perhaps...'
Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Courage is what happens when you put these three things together.
I think this sentence could be phrased more epicly.

'Courage is what happens when these three things come together' maybe?
Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
and prose that defies definition

* is curious what particular entries Katie had in mind *
Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Authors were challenged to write on one of three different topics and the result is 36 breathtaking depictions of virtue, judgment, failure, and perseverance.
I believe the flow would be better with a comma after 'topics'.
Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Let yourself be drawn into a world of battles and spaceships, werewolves and courtrooms, and the courage to stand up to it all.
It seems to make sense on first read, but something niggled me, and it actually is a bit odd under closer perusal. 'Let yourself be drawn into...the courage to stand up to it all'? Or 'Let yourself be drawn into a world of...the courage to stand up to it all'? I can't tell which is meant, and neither sense has the sentence as good as it could be. I think it needs some tweaking.
Awesome work, Katie.