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PostPosted: November 3rd, 2011, 10:11 pm 
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I honestly need ideas here. They have been at war for as long as anyone can remember, but I wonder if there could be something supernatural that could have lead to the downfall of the skatros to the dark side...

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PostPosted: November 4th, 2011, 12:13 am 
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I'm willing to help, I just need to go found out what they are! :D

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Bug me about it if I don't get back to you by tomorrow, alright? :D

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PostPosted: November 4th, 2011, 9:39 am 
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I suggest you read the other topics. They are very interrelated.

I would upload the map if I could... It's too big.

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Take a picture of it and then upload it.... Unless of course it's REALLY big!

Yes, I think I'll go read them :D

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I'm going to redo the map. I made too many changes to use the first one. I'll get back to you eventually!

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Sounds good, Birdy!

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PostPosted: November 10th, 2011, 7:38 pm 
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And here is the map.


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PostPosted: November 12th, 2011, 4:11 pm 
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Very cool map, Birdy.

Here are some questions to try and help you develop your world a bit more:
What's on the other half of Onot?
How come the Island of the king is hidden?
What are the islands off of Onot?

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PostPosted: November 12th, 2011, 6:21 pm 
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-The other half of Onot is inhabited sparsly by an ancient race. Let's see... There are jungles and rivers in the north (Congo-like), and savannah in the south. It was once the home of creatures called the Gallim. Dorimite explorers, valloians and skreeks that live in the Dorimay emire, have little idea of what they looked like besides crumbled ruins and temples with engravings of what look like lizards(they are actually wing-less dragons). According to the exploring team, there was civil unrest that lead to the civilzation's fall. They are thought to be an extinct race. The Gallim fell due to a revolution of democracy that fell to pieces, therefore the fragmentary leftovers of the civilization have perfected it's ideals but remain in hiding from the Dorimites that have invaded their turf.

-After major discussion with other persons, I've found that the King's Isle should not be isolated. It was first planned as the home of the skreek king but then he would be isolated from his people. As of now, the isle provides nothing to the story as of yet. It is cut off from the rest of Rantis due to it being in the middle of the ocean. I think that some other factors should be changed in order for this to not seem like Guardians of Ga'hoole. Therefore, the isle is now renamed Wallin Isle, which translates to razor in Skrac. It is a volcanic but plentiful place, used for exile in the Skreek kingdom, named Yanrama. (I've decided to bring all the tribes together in on kingdom)

- The islands south of Onot are like the islands that are off the coast of Alaska. They are covered with lush, wet woodland with a mild climate. They are the next target of the Dorimay Empire. They... are the Isles of Plenty.

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Very cool, Birdy :cool:

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