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 Post subject: Terminus: Her Father, Their Enemy, Our Villain.
PostPosted: May 13th, 2011, 12:15 pm 
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Terminus (real name: undecided)

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Terminus is a tall soldier with dark brown hair and nearly black eyes. He is Lumenian and his luze is a dark blue color... About this shade of blue.

History:
Terminus grew up in Realta as a soldier. When he was a teenager he was chosen by the elders to go on a hunting trip - along with six others - into the Northern Mountains. A chance experience made him get separated from the group and forced him deep into the caves.

Attacked and overpowered by Anikulum, Terminus had no choice but join them or die. They promised him power at the hands of an evil slave master - Pavix - and gave him a necklace. The necklace awoke his power. He discovered his true history.

Terminus returned home and pretended as if nothing had happened, waiting for the day he would get a chance to run into the uncharted territories, to receive the power he had been promised. He married and had a son and a baby daughter. Finally, he had a chance, he said goodbye to his family and went into battle, never to return.

Then it was over, or so he thought, he was across the lands, far away from Realta, being held in a place of honor and general above armies that awaited their time to attack the world. Until, one lazy day, he received news that his daughter and two others were in the northern mountains; two of them captured. He was ordered by Pavix to torture his own. To torment Emuna simply for the pleasure of making Elah weep for his lost child. He said no.

Pavix stripped him off his rank and kicked him from his castle, but he also forgot to tell his army. Terminus acted as if he had not been removed from rank, he pretended to still be in control. To save his daughter, if nothing else. But Pavix had taken from him his source of strength, his necklace. Without it, Terminus' powers would eventually be uncontrollable. They would overtake him.

Terminus rushed to the Northern Mountains were he suddenly remembered that Emuna had a necklace, something he could use. He had two choices; his life or hers. Emuna and Brian escaped.

Terminus busied himself trying to find them, to get them back in time. With much trials, they made it to Shamayim.

Terminus went to Realta and overtook it with his Anikulum army, then he waited for Emuna's return.

When Emuna returned he received news that Pavix was planning on capturing her and torturing her, worse than before. A fate he wouldn't wish on his worse enemy, let alone his most beloved daughter. He convinced himself that the only way to save her was to end her life before Pavix captured her. End her life and any other Lumenian.

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Now I just need to essence map him...which I'm so not doing today. :roll: But, yeah, I have some stuff in there you don't even find out until book three. ;) So enjoy the sneak preview and thank you for reading!

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 Post subject: Re: Terminus: Her Father, Their Enemy, Our Villain.
PostPosted: May 13th, 2011, 3:24 pm 
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Wow...Terminus is a lot more complicated than I thought. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Terminus: Her Father, Their Enemy, Our Villain.
PostPosted: May 13th, 2011, 3:25 pm 
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*has already ranted about this in chat*

Termy's backstory is cool. :cool:


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 Post subject: Re: Terminus: Her Father, Their Enemy, Our Villain.
PostPosted: May 13th, 2011, 3:34 pm 
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(@Aemi) He's more complex than I thought too... :shock:

(@Manda) Thanks. :D I'm glad you liked it.


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 Post subject: Re: Terminus: Her Father, Their Enemy, Our Villain.
PostPosted: June 14th, 2011, 10:58 pm 
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Pavix is a big 'ole jerk! :(

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 Post subject: Re: Terminus: Her Father, Their Enemy, Our Villain.
PostPosted: June 15th, 2011, 7:01 am 
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Namor Svensteel wrote:
Pavix is a big 'ole jerk! :(


*chuckles* Yup! He's nasty not niceness right there. :P


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